(Liberty) Bell Work
Read the sentence below. Do you see any problems? Do not rewrite the sentence. In fact, don't even fix the sentence. Instead, on your paper, tell the writer three things that need to be corrected.
its about to get really loud at fort william henry
Augment the sentence below to greatly improve it. Record your improved sentence on your paper.
It was loud.
*Augment: make (something) greater by adding to it
The accounts of Fort William Henry are heartbreaking and heroic, filled with an eventful siege,
a great account of gentlemanly respect, and some disastrous results.
Make a Dramatic Plea
- Tell the French general, the Marquis de Montcalm, why he should not take you prisoner.
- Tell the English general why he should surrender.
- Tell the Indians why they should not kill you.
It's your turn to defend the fort! Design your own air cannon at home. We'll brainstorm some ideas in class before you take to the drawing board. Use the video here and the Design Squad website to get your started with some ideas, and remember: